Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only the government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The status of our present day environment can only be worked on via government intervention as well as help from industries as individuals do not have the capacity. Personally, I will agree with claim as non-compliance is a major factor.
On one hand, community comprises of different people with various level of understanding and literacy. It seems to me that not complying to the rules guiding safe environment by the residents is a problem on its own. Since they do not understand the negative effect an pollution can have on them, there is no way they can be of help. For instance, a study carried out by WHO in a rural area of kwara state Nigeria reveals the presence of a virus(POLiO) on a dumping ground. Despite all efforts to curb the act of open dumping, the dwellers have failed to comply.
As an alternative, legislature can go a long way making the environment a conducive place. If the government enact a law of penalty, this will tend to tackle pollution. Also, large companies can be of help by reducing the amount of oil spills, abundance of plastic and toxic chemicals entering the water ways. For example Pharmaceutical companies have a way they dispose their unused toxic chemicals instead of channeling it to nearby streams. These entities understand what a safe environment is all about, so they try as much as possible to improve it.
In conclusion, I am convinced that with the joint effort of the government and big industries, our domains will be a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...jor factor. On one hand, community comprises of different people with various level of ...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y do not understand the negative effect an pollution can have on them, there is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81153846154 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94679396541 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5904730014 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204795823545 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591822348084 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640018740148 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113043440679 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063241081144 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.