Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In recent times, many individuals prefer to be bosses of their own other than being an employee in another settings. This usually happens because of unemployment then, the drawback could be lacking business ideas and mismanagement.
An increase in the rate of unemployment for present day graduates is alarming. People go from one one company to the other seeking white collar jobs, attending interviews and at the long run could not secure the job due to some factors best known to the organization. The society today also influence employment, as children or relations of individuals at the top get the good jobs before an advert is placed. This inturn has made many people make the decisions of setting themselves up. For instance, in a seminar organized by for a group of young entrepreneurs, about 80% of people in attendance settled as self-employed solely because of unemployment.
Lack of business ideas usually throw entrepreneurs off balance most times. Unstable choice of business, trying out what others are successful in also affects self-employed. Relatively, mismanagement is also factor. Indiscipline in spending, requesting for larger loans and expenses outweighing income sets in. All these cannot be properly maintained consequently leading to bankruptcy. For instance, it was discovered in Lagos Nigeria that about 75% of businesses that went down the drain in 2010 were caused by mismanagement.
In conclusion, these days, so many people decides to establish themselves rather than working for a company. This is most times caused by increase in unemployment rate and the probable demerits are lacking business ideas and mismanagement.
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Suggestion: one
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, so, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43076923077 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14031807834 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8658450615 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278538823937 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745411625509 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688012421709 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1583041136 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666170793878 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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