Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The process of globalisation has brought a huge amount of benefits in many aspects. In my opinion, both environmental protection and global business are benefit from the constantly growing cooperation across the border.
On the one hand, with a growing number of countries and multinational organisations engage in, environmental protection has progressed in recent years. To begin with, the international cooperation can unite more governments to deal with some global problems which seems impossible to solve by only one or several countries. For example, by hosting summit conference, each country will be more clear about their responsibilities of curbing greenhouse gas emission, which is an effective way to slow down the pace of global warming. Besides, with more cooperation among scientists and researchers globally, more advanced technologies could be shared to tackle with environmental issues. This practice is helpful especially for those developing countries whose technologies are relatively lagging and environmental problems are more severe.
On the other hand, globalisation in terms of economy also benefits world business to great extent. Firstly, international cooperation will make different countries to exert their relevant advantage, which can maximum their potential in economic development. Taking China as an example, the huge population attracts more labour intensive industries such as manufactures to invest in, creating more job opportunities. Furthermore, more international trade activities can accordingly give people more accessibility to enjoy high quality foreign commodities and this can improve people's living standard and sense of happiness as well. Finally, the global economy will eventually benefits from the increasingly multinational cooperation.
In conclusion, environmental protection and business are the two main aspects brought by globalisation, we cannot simply compare them, as they are two totally different domains and both of them are important and obvious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 676, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...lly, the global economy will eventually benefits from the increasingly multinational coo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32227734451 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.449049068 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191687136584 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685736281525 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560670259 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125438464896 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544740243147 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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