People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. Why do you think this is? Are arts as important as science and technology?
In this day and age, science and technology become the main driving forces of social and economic development. However, artists are also highly respected by the society. In this essay I will analyse those possible reasons and the importance of arts.
It is understandable that prominent artists have high social status. Firstly, it is the artists' performance and masterpieces that evoke people's intrinsic desire for beauty. From the perspective of evolution, our human being's utmost pursuit of beauty has never changed, from the very early cave painting to post-modernism. Artists play an important role in conduct aesthetic values in the whole process. Besides, artists are also the recorders of the history and culture, from their works people can get access to their cultural background, which is essential to build up the sense of identity in terms of nation and ethnic. In addition, even though artists do not directly produce fortunes, their behaviour can also promote the social progress. The Renaissance to the Western Culture can be the best illustration.
As to the importance of arts, I think their significance is not inferior to science and technology. One of the most essential reasons is that the art is a reflection of the progress of science and technology. Taking the movie as an example, being considered as a new genre of art, the development in movie industry represents the technology. The application of new technologies makes the films more advanced. Furthermore, science breakthrough comes from thinking and meditation, which can be brought by those profound artworks. Finally, science and technology represent the future and the masterpieces of art represent our past. Both of them integrate the process of human culture and neither could be ignored.
In conclusion, arts are important in human's development although they have played different roles from science and technology. As a result, it is reasonable that artists are highly regarded by the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
... high social status. Firstly, it is the artists performance and masterpieces that evoke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34493670886 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96754293785 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6237136142 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8947368421 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321888444078 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916865422709 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728873693453 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191698620829 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053677847653 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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