Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, advertising is ever-increasing popular among people of all ages, particularly among children. Some people hold an opinion that it can have negative effects on children and should be banned. However, from my perspective, I disagree with those people and think it has many benefits to children.
Those who support banning advertisements on children are not misguided that it would lead to impulsive consumption, which means children would buy numerous goods than they actually need due to they do not have enough self-control. In addition, a variety of advertisements always tend to highlight some merits the products have while they ignore the drawbacks, and therefore customers usually are victims to meet businessman’desire to make a fortune.
However, the disadvantages mentioned above can be rigorously supervised by their parents. For example, parents can limit their living expenses to reduce the purchase of unnecessary items. Furthermore, the advertising industry can be controlled by our government. To be more specific, the government can take a series of measures to strictly guarantee the reliability, which means it can make people rely on those products without a doubt.
Actually, advertisements around us have many advantages. Through watching some advertisements, it can make children learn more about them and pick the best one among similar shops. In the past, people have fewer choices to buy goods because they do not know other places where they can buy them without marketing. In addition, advertising on children promotes the economy at an alarming pace. Actually, in every family, expenditures on children take a significant segment, and therefore children marketing has a potential profit, which has been discovered by lots of businessmen.
In summary, though lots of advertisements on children have some drawbacks, it can be avoided by taking some actions, and it has tons of advantages far weights the disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50993377483 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29017793158 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4134398401 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383188930041 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131393775832 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091797696768 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220476989136 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101363430386 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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