Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In the current era of globalization, environmental protection has an indispensable role to play in the development of the economy. It is true that some urban areas have already had vehicle-free days when individual transportation is prohibited while public transportation is encouraged. I agree with those who contend that this action brings more benefits than downsides.
On the one hand, using public transportation could cause plenty of detrimental influences on the way people commute. Because of the poor infrastructure and inadequate facilities, people might find it hard to transit by buses or metros which are always full of workload. As a result, passengers will soon get exhausted when taking public transportation. In terms of security, these vehicle-free days can turn into appropriate opportunities for crime happening. People are prone to be robbed by pick-pockets or thieves when going by public transportation, especially buses. For instance, passengers might neglect his/her cargo while paying heed to the destination, which easily leads to expand the chances for crime occurring.
On the other hand, these days could immensely meet environmental needs. Firstly, by using a majority of public transportation, it can help to decline the gas emissions coming mostly from private vehicles, which also raise the awareness of people about environmental consciousness. In this day and age, the relationship between nature and industrialization is becoming a heated debate, therefore, the national and local authorities should take this action like an urgent solution for that issue. Secondly, days without vehicles can both address the congestion problem and enforce a beneficial habit among city dwellers. Traffic jams are always a constant matter for policymakers thanks to the colossal number of vehicles commuting on the street. Moreover, vehicle-free days can make people have a habit to use transportation because of its cheap fare, convenience, etc., which becomes in the long run. A case in point is that people will find that it is environmentally friendly when using public transportation, so they are willing to use them more often.
In conclusion, due to those benefits that vehicle-free days bring, I concur that we should encourage the government to implement it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51988636364 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32089999968 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0975800483 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.294117647 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151878807856 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474041912878 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471094865712 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091601752335 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271931491168 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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