Nowadays people have many choices
Nowadays people have many choices in every field and in every path.This can be due to enormous reasons.Out of those one of the vital factor which brings people with many choices is the development of technology.
now a days technology has been developed up to a level that people have many products and services in the same catergories. For an example ealier there were very few brands of laptops with few number of laptops.But now there are many laptops coming to the market with different added features increaing the competition among them selfs. therefore if a person wants to buy laptop he has many choices to consider. Not only with laptops it is similar in other products as well. With the development of technology day by day many products are coming to the market in which finaly results in people having more choices than they used to have.
now the world has become closer that now it can call the world as a village. And that also had resulted in leaving people with many more choices. Even for leisure now people have variety of choices.Earlier people use to watch movies which are produced in their own country.But now people can share movies, games, books in different methods and they have many choices to select from. also with new inventions more and more doors are open to students to carry researches and studies. there are many subjects wich people can select to carry out their studies.
therefore as mentioned earlier, in almost every field people are left with variety of choices than past days.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-08-17 | nguyendangquang.aspect | 84 | view |
| 2024-08-01 | Giang Tran | 78 | view |
| 2024-07-23 | MinhGoal1 | 89 | view |
| 2024-07-03 | susanti | 61 | view |
| 2024-05-20 | thaokim2003 | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...hoices in every field and in every path.This can be due to enormous reasons.Out of t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Out
...ath.This can be due to enormous reasons.Out of those one of the vital factor which ...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...ces is the development of technology. now a days technology has been developed up...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ces is the development of technology. now a days technology has been developed up to a l...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... the development of technology. now a days technology has been developed up to a l...
^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...re were very few brands of laptops with few number of laptops.But now there are many lapto...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...s of laptops with few number of laptops.But now there are many laptops coming to th...
^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...eaing the competition among them selfs. therefore if a person wants to buy laptop he has...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...eaing the competition among them selfs. therefore if a person wants to buy laptop he has...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elfs. therefore if a person wants to buy laptop he has many choices to consider. ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
... more choices than they used to have. now the world has become closer that now it...
^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Earlier
...sure now people have variety of choices.Earlier people use to watch movies which are pr...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... have variety of choices.Earlier people use to watch movies which are produced in t...
^^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...which are produced in their own country.But now people can share movies, games, boo...
^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... they have many choices to select from. also with new inventions more and more doors...
^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... they have many choices to select from. also with new inventions more and more doors...
^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...udents to carry researches and studies. there are many subjects wich people can selec...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subjects'' or 'subject's'?
Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
... researches and studies. there are many subjects wich people can select to carry out the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...n select to carry out their studies. therefore as mentioned earlier, in almost every f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...n select to carry out their studies. therefore as mentioned earlier, in almost every f...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81368821293 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44549069856 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8009045985 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461599274183 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172128904086 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144219870489 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295024189417 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117903766967 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.