In modern life, many people believe that employers can manage their job in the home. This is the reason why some people argue that working in the home will be more beneficial rather than working in the office. This essay will explain about pros and cons.
Being work in the home increase flexibility and efficiency. This condition will allow people to manage their schedules that share the obligation between family activities and works. The formal job will take time about 8 hours per day or 40 hours per week, but working in the home will reduce that time so that people get extra time for their family. Besides, people who work in the home will be more saving costs not only accommodation for food but also transportation. People can deserve their lunch box in the home and people do not need adding cost for fuel to go to the office.
On the other hand, if people have a formal work in their home, they will take two obligations between family activities and work. People will get some distractions due to the fact that research shows that humans cannot do a job just one time together. For instance, in the middle of their focus in the work, that people who also be a parent must pick-up their children to the school, then they will need an extra time to continue the last job that has been started before.
In conclusion, working in the home is flexible because people have an opportunity to sharing time between jobs and family. But, doing the job need concentration and focus, it will be hard for people to do multitasking activities at one time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62589928058 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36247425649 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503597122302 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2056111135 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180786790797 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868981717549 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051960254702 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133219858891 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365738215696 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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