Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is irrefutable that fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many parts of the world,
but some nations are taking a step forward and using renewable sources like wind, solar and
tidal energy. Definitely, it is a positive development. In the following paragraphs I intend to
support my views with my arguments.
The main advantage of using alternate sources is that the conventional sources like coal and
oil are non-renewable. They take millions of years to make and we are finishing them at an
alarming rate. This means that if we finish the existing resources they will be gone forever as
far as our and the coming many generations are concerned. Energy from the wind, the sun
and the sea is an everlasting source of power. So, more and more governments should come
forward in promoting these sources.
Another big advantage of these non-conventional sources is that they do not pollute the
environment. We all know that global warming and damage to the protective ozone layer
are caused by carbon-dioxide and other by-products of fossil fuels. If urgent steps are not
taken towards the use of natural sources like sun and wind, then the time is not far when
the whole earth will transform into a boiling pot.
Although the use of these alternative sources has some hurdles such as the initial cost of
setting up solar panels and wind farms is very high and these are also dependent on the
geographical locations. However, once the initial cost has been met with, their maintenance
is practically negligible.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the use of these alternative sources is a very
positive development. It should be the global priority to invest in such research and
development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05084745763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82950352606 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6511402743 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304971843393 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090549175051 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104762226958 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789527190165 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948614437283 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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