Write a letter to one of your foreign friends about finding a suitable job for you.
Also share your experience with other companies and your expectations.
Hey Bob,
Hope you are doing awesome.
I hope you find this letter in a healthy manner. I am really sorry for not writing you from a long time but you can realise my hectic schedule from past weeks since I wrote a letter to you. I am experiencing tough time and decided to work in Ireland and expecting your opinion regarding this.
Now, a sigh of relief, the project I was working on completed and I am open to look for new opportunities in abroad. You are well aware of my technical knowledge and my sincerity towards work that I am willing to take up new challenges and ambitions for my goals. I have always wanted to make my life enjoyable and to live in a multicultural environment. I think it would be fascinating to socialise and work with people of different origins while I can further enhance my career and line in an other country for better environment.
Therefore, I and looking forward to work in mechanical engineering as I always did in Australia as a permanent employee in a manufacturing company. So I need some information from you about this as you have experience of working in different countries in the same industry. As for now, is is important for me to get work permit or can I migrate with applying for temporary work visa and later apply for a job? Will it be necessary to do IELTS or TOEFL certification done? And finally can I apply a job before moving to Ireland?
Looking forward to hear on this from you soon. Convey my wishes to your family.
Best regards
Jimmy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy manner" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...some. I hope you find this letter in a healthy manner. I am really sorry for not writing you ...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st weeks since I wrote a letter to you. I am experiencing tough time and decided ...
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Line 13, column 493, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...n further enhance my career and line in an other country for better environment. T...
^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 287, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...tries in the same industry. As for now, is is important for me to get work permit or ...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...moving to Ireland? Looking forward to hear on this from you soon. Convey my wishes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5802919708 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77333842902 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9908438533 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4375 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196602845016 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603594192088 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501374257977 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110990511562 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501295967444 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.