People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Should people consider the consequences before undertaking risky actions? While some might argue that not knowing the consequence is what makes risky actions unique,others believe that a person should ponder about the aftermath before attempting a risky action. Personally, I assert that consequences and outcomes should be considered if it is feasible, for the following reasons.
First, some risky actions are not really neccessary. These risky actions do not have much importance in an individual's life and they might be just leisure activities. Take motorcylce racing as an example. Motorcylcle racing is not usually the source of income for a person, it is rather an entertaining activitiy. In this case, It is be better to consider all the possible negative consequences before engaging this activity. As motorcyle racing is the cause of death for many people every year, thinking about this consequence is advantageous as one might choose another kind of sport to fill his leisure time.
Next, even when risky actions are not just casual, and are important decisions in life, it is best to spend some time considering all the possible good outcomes and negative ones. For example, If an individual is going to change his career, he definitely should spend as much time as he can find to examine every nuances of the posible outcomes. In this way, he can avoid a risk which is so in favor of negative consequences and choose to find alternative ways. Thinking about consequences of an action is especially advantgeous for making decisions that affect a person's entire life.
Last, even though examination of possible outcomes is the best way, it should be acknlowledged that it might not always be viable. Some actions, although risky, should be performed in a matter of minutes and there is simply not enough time to consider all the possible outcomes. Take a medical emergency as an example, when a person is hit by a vehicle and needs immediate surgeory, there is little time to choose between possible surgical procedures, so, medical professionals are likely to choose one just to save this person's life. So, when these actions, although risky, should be performed in an emergency, it might be most advantageous to choose without going through all the possible outcomes.
To conclude, this matter needs so many factors to be considered. While considering outcomes is beneficial in avoiding unneccessary danger or making bad decisons, in some case, where time is not on our side, risky actions should be performed without hesitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17831325301 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86313330075 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460240963855 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9384074714 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.105263158 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125758700889 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530519792178 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047227283042 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852069369538 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434726906176 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.