Studying and establishing a good career for oneself is generally the aim of every individual to lead a prospoerius life. In some situation this goal become very difficult to attain because of many obstacles. Getting married before comleting studies can be one of those obstacle. I support the thought that person should not get married until they have completed their studies and they are capabale enough to support their partner in all circumstances.
Marrige is a huge commitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the person is not financial independent, then it can become the cause of many problems in household. To lead a good life money is the most important thing. For Example if the person will not earn well, than it will be difficult to fulfill essential needs like food, medical among other.
With financial factor, Emotional and maturity level is also a neccessity to create strong relation. Through studies, an indiviual becomes more mature. Their understanding of world around them gradually increases. With this their mutuarity level also expand.
Although getting married is everyone's personal decision, But Before taking such decisions we should always measure pros and cons of it. One Wrong decision can ruin your life. Getting married before completing studies has more negative sides as compare to positive.
- Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. What solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue. 55
- Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion? 56
- Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion? 56
- Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative effects on individual lives as well on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this obstacle' or 'those obstacles'?
Suggestion: this obstacle; those obstacles
... before comleting studies can be one of those obstacle. I support the thought that person shou...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...mitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the per...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...mitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the per...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ample if the person will not earn well, than it will be difficult to fulfill essenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25114155251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71814176526 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.988046117 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216488942514 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668350051879 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922373351509 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127262765801 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119588881178 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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