You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to this friend in your letter
In your letter
• Introduce Yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring
Dear Anish,
How are you? i hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to ask you about the scenic beauty of Singapore. You might not know me. I'm the maternal cousin of your high school friend Ram. Being a resident of Chennai, I'm planning to visit your country, Singapore for this winter.
Every year i used to visit different places in India. Singapore is a new city for me to visit. But my dad was working there in 2010. And now I'm coming there to attend the wedding of my dad's friend's daughter, Nila which falls on 23rd of december. Since I'm visaed for a month, I've planned to stay till the end of the December.
Is Singapore a beautiful city? When I surfed the internet, I came cross many places like the Bird's Park, the Marine Bay and the zoo of Singapore. Does Singapore have any hill station? And, how about the climate there? If you tell me about the things that are needed to survive in Singapore, it'll be easy for me to start my purchase for the trip. Though i know my dad's friend, I would like to wander with you in Singapore, as Ram had told many positive things about you. Reply me if you'll be free in this December.
Waiting to hear back from you soon.
Warm regards,
Gayathri.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19632015476 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0943910343 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.5 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.25 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221904768418 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656554558014 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659084624229 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141352056753 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121434630571 0.0580467560999 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.06 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.