Having job
Although such topic, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on having a job after graduation can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is irrespective of the numerous arguments which were existed on either side, continuing education is more beneficial.
On one hand, there are several aspects in favor that of my stance. To commence with, as soon as juniors find career opportunities, their financial capacity will be improved. For example, as per a study which was published recently by York Shire University, more than 75 % of British people are of the belief that finding jobs is crucial for citizens' earning capacities. Therefore, authorities should shed more light on finding jobs by launching awareness campaigns.
On the other hand, as every coin has two sides, continuous education is associated with various merits such as interpersonal skills and people's soft skills. Moreover, whereas the fundamental essence of learning emphasizes the significance of intercultural skills, the corresponding impacts of communication skills such are acknowledged, and soft skills could be inferred evidently from learning, which the implications of cognitive abilities and personal skills are presumed. Consequently, educationalists have to conduct extra-curricular activities to let their people reap the fruit of education.
In conclusion, after I manifested the above notions, it could be observed that there is equally potential evidence to support my claim, and my opinion is that continuous has a dramatic effect on individuals and nations.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-23 | Ayman Abdelwahab aly | 85 | view |
- Business profit 77
- Public transportation 85
- Having job 85
- University education 88
- voting 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...Although such topic, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73221757322 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.379924391 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673640167364 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7850986959 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155536276503 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550502732887 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753379705218 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080203268056 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644552094324 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.