Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?
In our modern world, traveling is the best choice for vacations. People usually can’t decide between solo trips or traveling with a group. I prefer to travel lonely because of two main reasons, which will explore in the following essay.
First, I think that trips are opportunities to face new populations and ideas. So it is boring to take your family everywhere, and travel with people you know them already. Besides, close friends meet you every day for some hours, and it is better to leave them just for a while on your vacation. I think that it is better even to not use your cell phone during a trip. Humans travel because they need to make new experiences and visit new places, not to spending more time with their homies. In my first decade of life, my father didn’t let me take a trip lonely. When I was sixteen years old, I traveled alone for the first time in my life. Although it was too short for me, as a teenager, it was an attractive experience. During that trip, I found out that when you travel alone, you have more time to face new things and new humans. It helps you to see regions with different religions, languages, foods, and mindsets.
Moreover, when you travel with a group of people, you must be flexible, and you have to match yourself with other’s desires. It is so confusing for me, and it doesn’t let me enjoy my journey. As a personal experience, last year I attended a group of our university’s students for camping. During the camp, we must live together for about five days. Every day we had a problem with our teammates’ divergence. Each member of our camping team wanted to impose others to accept him or her. I perplexed completely, and after two days, I decided to come back home. You need relaxation during a trip however, diverse desires would puzzle your mind. Traveling with people you love is so satisfying however, you should expect a hectic mood on that tour.
In conclusion, I think that traveling alone is better than with a group because of two reasons, in a solo trip you have more time to learn new ideas, and you don’t need to match yourself with other passengers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 694, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 22.412803532 281% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 383.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63707571802 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6318045708 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 145.348785872 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535248041775 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 3.25607064018 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3027385637 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2173913043 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290797153672 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807442562811 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848470508369 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200560033334 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053638742978 0.0443174109184 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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