Definitely the college years are one of the best time in some person`s life, as it was for me. However, it should not be true for everyone since there are many aspects in the teenager`s life and sociality that can lead to relevant problems, such as bulling, alcohol and drugs addiction. Despite of this, college is a period where we are used to have a good social life, not a lot of worries about the world and a inspiring excitement about our future and dreams.
Usually people in college already has a strong personality that helps them to find a group of friends whose can last forever. In the first years of adolescence, the beginning of college, the person has a such personality that reflects on their way of dressing, acting and integrating with people. It is a time where the person`s personality is being firmed. When people with whose similarities are put together, they create a crew of friends with whom they spend all the college period, with the potential for lasting for life. They are normally labeled as ‘’the best friends’’ or ‘’ the childhood friends’’.
Other reason that makes me think that college period is great is because people do not have a lot of responsibility and worries. When I was in college, for example, my biggest worries were to have good grades so I could impress my parents, to be close to my friend as much as could and avoid getting into a flight that could put us apart. I did not have to worry with the bills to pay at the end of the month or with cleaning, groceries, car repair, etc. In college, life Is more about studies and socialization with friends.
Thirdly, it is a period where we are all very excited about the future. It is when we start to wonder what we want to be as an adult. On that time, our dreams were flying higher and everything seems to be possible and reasonable. This feeling usually brings motivation to fight to our dreams, which can be either getting into a medical school or traveling around the world in an exchange program.
Thus, my experience in life allows me to agree with the statement that college is one of the best time in someone’s life, although it cannot be generalized because everyone lived different experience in college. But, in my opinion, college is a period where you normally have many friends, no big worries and a lot of dreams and will to go after them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to having'.
Suggestion: used to having
... this, college is a period where we are used to have a good social life, not a lot of worrie...
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Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ot a lot of worries about the world and a inspiring excitement about our future a...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...round the world in an exchange program. Thus, my experience in life allows me to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, third, thirdly, thus, as for, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71933962264 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88568910811 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8703563359 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330255739153 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101268022727 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897156222888 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174113588141 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983539560805 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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