In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, in some nation the amount of juvenile crime is increasing. There is an opinion that adolescents committing severe offences should be sentenced on the same basis as matured criminals. I somehow agree with the notion because justice must be objective.
First, I am convinced that children under the age of majority who committed severe crime as intentional homicide or torture should be ready to serve the same amount of time in jail as adult offenders. This is because teenagers should be aware that justice will be served and in case of a major crime, they will not have any advantages due to their age. Thus, it will act as a deterrent for the youth and discourage them from commitment of a felony. As well as this, it will be right to sentence an adolescent for a shorter jail term because released criminals tend to commit a new offense just after dismission.
However, those cases, which are involved mature criminals who may force a child to break a law, should be assisted with a great deliberation due to the reason that a teenager may be a victim in spite the fact of committing an offence. For instance, an adult offender may threaten to a younger person by different violent acts in case if they will not obey and refuse to perpetrate an offence. Consequently, in this kind of cases jury or a judge should take into account the age of a convicted person.
In conclusion, I believe that major crimes should be sentenced equally despite the age of a criminal. Meanwhile, juridical system should consider if a person under the age majority was involved into a crime by force or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75800711744 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69229253664 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7535611235 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238553575177 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943467387587 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545826938594 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152426109474 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364178535942 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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