The data which showed by graph explain the growth of population fron 1940 to 2000 in three districts which located in the U.S. state of oregon.
the greatest change was Washington which experienced significant rise.
It was consisted of Washington, Yamhill, and Columbia whose the difference was interested because they did not decrease.Life figures of Washington was the highest from all three regions and climb sharply from 75 thousands in 1940 to 125 in 1970.It has the distance which lead 2 categories below it and it so far.The second biggest value was Yamhill, it was perched in the amount of 30 thousands in 1940 and then go up to 45 thousands in 1970.It only added by 15 thousands people during 30 years which followed by the last one.It was Columbia which is the lowest thousands.it was around 20 thousands in 1940 and only reached 35 thousands people.
In the one hand,from 1970 to 2000 the three of city continue to advance without the slightest of value reduction.Still in the same of expansion pattern.Led by Washington in the first place.It was split up more than the earlier period, from 120 thousands in 1970 to 240 thousands in 2000.For sure, that was so large which is meant the life in Washington very hight and of course, there are also lower death.While yamhill was in the position of later still had raised and reached grade of 90 thousands which overtaken by Columbia.It was the fewest from all of this place.It was developed from 35 thousands in 1970 to 75 thousands in 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, then, while, of course, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85836909871 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7765951707 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536480686695 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 22.4926829268 342% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 268.720424729 43.030603864 624% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 377.333333333 112.824112599 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.6666666667 22.9334400587 339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 5.23603664747 497% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108444525292 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909491338424 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0044331627747 0.0843802449381 5% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909491338424 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0044331627747 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 13.2329268293 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 61.2550243902 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 10.3012195122 289% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.9970731707 298% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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