The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Ever since the concept of a “flat world” was brought up by Karl Morgan, people have never looked at the world they inhabited the same way as their forefathers did decades ago. Countries are interdependent on each other economically, politically and environmentally. Never before has the saying “No man is an island” been so thoroughly understood and respected – countries look out for what their neighbors do and offer helps to sustain their own growth and it is not as easy to spark a war nowadays as it was in the 1940s. This trend might have urged the author to lopsidedly emphasize the ...
- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. 90
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 85
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 100
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No. of Words: 876 350
Write the essay in 30 minutes. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 35 15
No. of Words: 876 350
No. of Characters: 4378 1500
No. of Different Words: 444 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.44 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.998 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.848 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 313 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 238 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 165 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 122 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.029 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.416 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.657 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.215 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.386 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5