Human has discovered many extremes destination with was not known to the world. They made it possible overcoming many difficulties and challenges on the way. Moreover, few places are now opened for tourists. Offering visit to tourist has unlatched the door for travelers to enjoy the beauty of nature, but reaching to the place is certainly not free of life risk. This essay will discuss the advantages of visiting such places and also the disadvantages which may come along.
Visiting to the extreme places is always thrilling for travel loving people. Reaching to these places after lot of hurdles enable them to enjoy the nature closely, while giving them a chance to enjoy the view which them have not seen it before. For instance, one cannot fee the essence of being in between of the Sahara Desert until they visit them in person. Likewise, the feeling of getting almost frozen in the Antarctic is not comparable to any other place. This utmost beautify can be only enjoyed by visiting these places. But visitors should take the risk measure in account.
Travelling to the difficult tourist destinations can thrilling but risky as well. Most of the tough destination are newly discovered and have very limited access to transport and other facilities. Due to the change in climate condition may cause difficulties to evacuate from the location and in the worst case can risk visitor's life. Recently there was a land slide which happen in the Himalayas, an extreme destination for trekkers, and few people lost their life before rescue team reached the place. So, traveler should always consider the risk before planning.
In conclusion, visitors have started visiting the greatest places breaking down the hurdle on their way to enjoy the mesmerize views. This essay has discussed about the pros and cons of visiting those destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'extremes'' or 'extreme's'?
Suggestion: extremes'; extreme's
Human has discovered many extremes destination with was not known to the w...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g down the hurdle on their way to enjoy the mesmerize views. This essay has discussed about t...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this destination' or 'those destinations'?
Suggestion: this destination; those destinations
...sed about the pros and cons of visiting those destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06885245902 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53676858229 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2084966402 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256621888582 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751213725805 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660962551819 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151648172947 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606728869967 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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