It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
I disagree with the statement that one should have many knowledge of academic subjects.I believe that specialising in one subject can lead to one develop and follow one’s own interest and contribute more in their field. One can get well paid jobs and that matches their interests.
First, one must specialise in a field they are interested in. This helps them develop their interests, while just having knowledge of academic subjects will not help you develop many interests as you will get bored by the quantity of information in each field. Also, if you specialise in your interested field, you will devote more efforts and time in your field without any external motivation. While many people read many academic subjects just to clear an exam or graduate from their college.
Second, because many domains like engineering and doctor are so vast & complicated that you need years of practice to master these domains. It’s not humanly possible just to become a great doctor and an engineer together. One must focus on their domain and try to specialise in that. It’s only then they can contribute and make their mark in their field. While understanding many academic subjects does not help you contribute much to one field as you don’t have much knowledge of that field.
Third, specialising also help in getting well payed jobs. It’s because once you specialise, there are many few people in the world that can do what you can do in your field. And let’s say if you become a better programmer, then the society and businesses needs lot of programmers. You can easily get a well payed job. While just merely reading various academic subject might not help you much in job hunting.
Therefore, I believe that specialising in one subject is much more important than just having basic understanding of various subjects. One can truly make their mark by specialising in one subject rather that just be ordinary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...with the statement that one should have many knowledge of academic subjects.I believ...
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Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...with the statement that one should have many knowledge of academic subjects.I believe that spe...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ave many knowledge of academic subjects.I believe that specialising in one subjec...
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Line 15, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s. You can easily get a well payed job. While just merely reading various academic su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08049535604 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64852043485 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2738139275 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26369027017 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937447331739 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966267929308 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184895875648 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677707646983 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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