These days, art as well as music have become integral part of people's lives because of numerous reasons. While life is impossible sans science and technology experts because of modern era. Therefore, i will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are various reasons behind importance of scientists and technology creators but first and foremost is that nowadays most of the people depend on modern way of leading lives. In another words, masses are busy in their hectic schedules so, they do not have much time to do their work with hands that's why they use technology therefore, technology experts are extremely important for progressing because they create new and unique things for people. Furthermore, scientists make different types of devices and space travel robots which are immensely helpful for new discovery. However, scientists invent new medicines and machines, these are extremely beneficial to diagnose health problem within seconds thanks to these gadgets, people live long life.
On the other hand, music is helpful to recreate inhabitant's mind because, people suffer from various mental problem dint of long working hours hence, they need to relaxation. If they listen to music, then will forget their all stress, sometimes a few songs connect with someone's emotions. Moreover, number of people have a good talent, related to art in order to that they will get and fame because of this felid. Apart from this, art has become important sector, which attracts tourists. As a result, nation' economy will imcrease dint of tourism.
To conclude, although art and music have become integral part of today's life but, scenitists and technology experts are more important for nation and citizen's progress.
- Scientists and technology experts are more valued by modern society than musicians and artists To what extent to do you agree? 78
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 61
- It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- some people argue that government should spend money on public services and facilities, but not on arts. do you agree or disagree? 73
- With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29285714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50317145776 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4623843108 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112411357102 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383800932654 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494590049312 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737915880255 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470754769236 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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