Advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
In this day and age, people tend to live in the city and this trend has both benefits and drawbacks which will be compared and analyzed in this essay.
To commence with one evident merits of living of city is that people have a plenty of jobs opportunities are better with a high salary. They can enhance quality of life, who afford basic costs and meet the personal demands.
In other words, when living in the city, people approachable modern with technology. The city has many entertaining centers like: cinemas, coffee shop and restaurants to relax after hard working. Besides, working and studying conditions will be enhanced. Students can use computer to learn and work effectively.
On the other hand, there is some obvious demerit that would arise is polluted environment. Environmental pollution due to rubbish and smoke. Smokes come from vehicles and factories that pollute water, soil and air. Environmental pollution affects heath very seriously. They can cause respiratory diseases, lung cancer... One additional demerit is the pressure from work or study. A company with many employees will create a competitive environment so require more knowledge. They will reduce both mental and physical heath because of job requirements.
In conclusion although there is advantage of living in the city, there are certain disadvantages which still exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29953917051 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78578956495 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9305837522 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.875 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5625 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175782426935 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509920627043 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126403898137 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140265968139 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183506682569 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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