Watching TV is bad for children. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that children can be harmful when they watch television while others say that it is food for them. From my point of view, I totally agree that children should not watch television.
To begin with, children distract their study. They will spend time watching TV instead of focusing on their study. When kids watch television too much, their results can be decreased. For example, when children do not have much time to finish their homework, they will get bad scores.
Another reason worth mentioning is that children are influenced by some unsuitable programmes with their ages. On the television, some shows are related to bad behaviors, sex, violence and so on. The shows spoil the mindset of children. In addition, they can imitate these actions. For instance, when they see bad shows or violent films, they will behave badly with everyone and speak rude to family members.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that watching television is harmful to children. They cannot develop both physically and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13017751479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46323052904 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7825452845 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292338757383 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10272228628 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716558690997 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181561551452 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351289709783 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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