Travelling is more dwelling these days as before which is a matter of concern to many people. Also travelling has a lot to do with the growth of the economy. travelling or migrating can only be possible if in case we have other opportunities outside our country.
Moreover, travelling is the only way which can not only rejuvenates us but also helps us to grow as a person independently.As travelling acts a s a therapy to lot of people it can also is done for a purpose for instance for a business purposes or for a grabbing a good opportunity which one can get only outside there country.
Furthermore, the advancement in technology has led us to travel through various mediums of transportation which our government has facilitated to us with. Such as buses, cars , planes etc. Also the roads which are been maintained for connectivity has also to play its role in increase in tourism . on the other hand we also cannot deny the fact that tourism has varied from place to place which has generated the inflow of foreign exchange in ones country.
In conclusion i agree to the statement mentioned above there is huge increase in terms of travelling from past till the present and will be increasing in the future too. As with change in time , some change in ones life is as important as anything else which has to be prioritized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... is a matter of concern to many people. Also travelling has a lot to do with the gro...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Travelling
...t to do with the growth of the economy. travelling or migrating can only be possible if in...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ps us to grow as a person independently.As travelling acts a s a therapy to lot of...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...person independently.As travelling acts a s a therapy to lot of people it can als...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ilitated to us with. Such as buses, cars , planes etc. Also the roads which are be...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to play its role in increase in tourism . on the other hand we also cannot deny t...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... play its role in increase in tourism . on the other hand we also cannot deny the ...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rated the inflow of foreign exchange in ones country. In conclusion i agree to th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hange in ones country. In conclusion i agree to the statement mentioned above ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n the future too. As with change in time , some change in ones life is as importan...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...As with change in time , some change in ones life is as important as anything else w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68644067797 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87746277482 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1898287175 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208207656992 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824697791263 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673021118033 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136253401437 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793395166743 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.