Dear Sir,
I have been dreaming about getting an admission to Master of Data Sciences in your college for many days and I feel grateful by knowing that my interview has been scheduled for next month 10th at 9 AM. Unfortunately, I have other prefixed appointment. We are launching a new website on the same day and it would be extremely difficult for me to ask for a leave. We have been working day and night for this day to come and my presence should be imperative to the process because I am the core architect for the entire process.
I am writing this to request our interview day to postpone, preferably for the next day or I could event manage for the post-lunch session at around 2 PM. The reason is, both career and personal pursuits are important for me. I hope you consider my request.
I would also like to know a few more details about the interview so that I could be equipped myself better. Could you please let me know how long the interview process would be and do I have to undergo any assessments.
Thanks in advance. Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Sudheerkumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53731343284 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62517848727 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2404326198 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212115084982 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781763231658 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496830364518 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106841927403 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536046699532 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.