You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival. Write a letter to the manager of the shipping company about it and say
– What furniture did you order?
– What was the damage?
– Suggest what needs to be done about it
Dear sir
I am writing this letter ti have your attention on my problem. Let me explain in detail.
my name is lisa. yesterday, i ordered a table of your store and they commited to deliver it to my today. But when i received it was damaged. The corner of the the table was spoiled. I think the deliverer was careless during they shipped it. The table is brown in color and has the code BTA55. I ordered it at 8AM yesterday, so please check it with the shipper to solve my problem. Because it is not my fault and i do not accept you fix my table so please provide me new good. If you do not agree, i will bring it back to you and please give my payment back.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
lisa
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- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for 91
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.2) Ex 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am writing this letter ti have your at...
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Suggestion: My
...y problem. Let me explain in detail. my name is lisa. yesterday, i ordered a ta...
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Suggestion: Yesterday
... explain in detail. my name is lisa. yesterday, i ordered a table of your store and th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... detail. my name is lisa. yesterday, i ordered a table of your store and they ...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ted to deliver it to my today. But when i received it was damaged. The corner of...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r it to my today. But when i received it was damaged. The corner of the the table...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...received it was damaged. The corner of the the table was spoiled. I think the delivere...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...received it was damaged. The corner of the the table was spoiled. I think the delivere...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...ss during they shipped it. The table is brown in color and has the code BTA55. I ordered it at...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...problem. Because it is not my fault and i do not accept you fix my table so pleas...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ovide me new good. If you do not agree, i will bring it back to you and please gi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am looking forward to hearing from you lisa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 573.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06382978723 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18462741717 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.121233825 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.75 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.75 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125427055841 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490470427645 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389493130015 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740902069518 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031474753326 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.6 8.37731958763 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.08 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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