Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the imporortance of the role which playing games has on children. A controvercial question that is often raised in this regard is the type of the game that children play. Although computer games has been so popuular among the teenagers, the adverse effects of computer games are undeniable. I totally disagree with these kinds of play because of the adictive effects, health problems, and inactive circumsatances of the computer games.
In the first place, it is crystal clear that children who play the computer games, devote most of their presious time to that. After playing for days it is a challenging task for parents to prohibit them from playing, since they become adicted to such plays. They play online, and after every part of the game it becomes more serious that they even coud not find time to eat the normal meals.
Secondly, Most of the obesity problems that our societies face lies at the root of inactive playing. Chidren in the apartments sit in front of the computer and spend their time just playing, which is physically inactive action. So they began to gain weight and they are lesargic to have an outdoor play.
Last but not least, Playing computer games is a barrier for chidren's creativity. A noteworthy statistics revealed by a educational institution in my country showed that children who find every things virtual, are less likely to have interest in practical things. By avoiding tasks that are more practical, they lose the invaluable skill of creativity. In the past, the younger generation used to play outdoor, like plaing with the sands in the beach, which trigered their imagination and creativity; however, these days most of the compter games have been replaced by these activities.
To sum up, Based on the reasons stated above, I think it is now clear that parents should be more cautious about childrens spare time. They should avoid children spending their time on the computer games in order to have healthy life, and be more creative by active playing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93930635838 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54050845967 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552023121387 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9563379918 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8125 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269431488947 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929680859601 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524437023572 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153238352376 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617974376302 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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