An information when published in news paper or on the TV has a power to change humans thought process. Some times some informations of news get permanent place in our mind and brain but others are forget in a moment. Normally, it is not depend on mental power, it depends on the presentation of the informations. In that case, several people asserted that information description with photography can put more affect that alone stories. I completely agree with the thought. So, I will explain my both of views bellow.
Fast of all a picture is a worth of thousand words. Nowadays reporting any report editor try to add at least one relevant picture because it create a attractive presentation, which will help nation to understand the topics easily. For example, Oxford and ADB university study found that humans brain is more responding with picture colour than written words. Moreover, for publishing any magazine editor normally try to choose colour full picture for cover to mesmerised reader.
One more essential point of view can be added that, photography can create attraction while mean it can works on advertising. For instance, recently those are various land of online news channel, they only show the picture of the incident attraction reader even reader will get the full news description after like on click. For make the matter stronger will also can take a look on famous media YouTube. In 2018, Google AdSense also inform to all the YouTuber to focus on the thumbnail of the video for getting more views. So, we can tell that, increasing feel and attraction photography can works more than words.
In conclusion, imaged news will ever still the most effective way which has to be encouraged and developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
An information when published in news paper or on the TV has a power to change huma...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ce in our mind and brain but others are forget in a moment. Normally, it is not depend...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...forget in a moment. Normally, it is not depend on mental power, it depends on the pres...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...scription with photography can put more affect that alone stories. I completely agree with ...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...t least one relevant picture because it create a attractive presentation, which will h...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... one relevant picture because it create a attractive presentation, which will hel...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to colour'
Suggestion: to colour
... magazine editor normally try to choose colour full picture for cover to mesmerised re...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...can create attraction while mean it can works on advertising. For instance, recently ...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ing feel and attraction photography can works more than words. In conclusion, imag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, still, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97586206897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6754021112 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8941653903 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132462574822 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428834793839 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364288325685 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770091270963 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144866020943 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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