Someday paper money and coins will be replaced by credit cards and online methods of monetary exchange. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that in the future credit cards and online payment ways will entirely take place of cash money. I, however, disagree with this notion as I believe along with plastic money and online fund transfer techniques, paper money will also be in circulation.
Increasing usage of modern technology will led people more likely to opt for cards and online transactions. Paytm, an online payment application, or card swiping machines are being used everywhere be it at petrol pumps, shopping malls, jewellery shop or while buying vegetables in the supermarket. It means ones need not to carry cash while buying any costly or cheaper products, just few clicks or card swipe can serve the purpose. In contrast to past, in order to purchase utilities, buyers had to bring cash and sometimes it could be excessive if the products are expensive which always had security concerns.
Due to flexibility of using cash, people will continuously use it in their day-to-day affairs. This is because, cards and plastic money can only be used with the help of computer software. At time of system failure or maintenance, a person is unable to cater his/her requirements. For instance, when technology failure occurs, all kind of online transactions cannot be performed. Moreover, in case of lost or steal of cards or mobile phone, these services are no longer in use. Paper money, on the other hand, does not require any form of technology involvement to use and can be kept in multiple places to ensure the safety.
In conclusion, despite the ever increasing popularity of cards as a form of money or online techniques of fund transfer, I believe owing to flexibility of paper money it will always be preferred by people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...reasing usage of modern technology will led people more likely to opt for cards and...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'carry'?
Suggestion: carry
...the supermarket. It means ones need not to carry cash while buying any costly or cheaper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96527777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74388173212 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9716935661 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268124760817 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962959636649 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716920834263 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188927315355 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672618094393 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.