Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been said that the fixed school dress should be prohibited as it does not have any significance. I, however, firmly disagree with this viewpoint as I believe that uniform strengthen the equality and is helpful in professional life.
School uniform promotes uniformity among students. By wearing same uniform, every student feels equal to others, hence, there is no discrimination among pupils. If in case, the formal school attire is forbidden, then elite class students are likely to have better appearance than others. Students, who are not able to afford expensive or branded clothes, may feel inferior, and this might effects on their academic performance. Thus, core meaning of school, which is to promote fraternity, will be neglected. Even, it has been proved in research that wearing same uniform increases solidarity and boost up performance of the learners.
The school dress code not only helps in enhancing equality among students, but this also can yield positive results in their professional life. In order to instil sense of discipline, uniform plays a crucial role. By wearing school dress, learners develop punctuality and discipline which is pivotal to succeed in the career. It has been made mandatory in almost all the companies to wear professional attire as well as to follow certain regulations. Therefore, ones will not feel overwhelmed when they will have to steep into business culture. For them, this would not be their first experience, they would be used to it. In contrast, students, who are not habitual of wearing uniforms, will be deprived from these interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, I could reiterate that wearing uniform plays tremendous role for preparing students for the professional life and spread uniformity among pupils in the school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: leave
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01013513514 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52870436817 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6099191708 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275099573508 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968061108643 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522070502036 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178196740554 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142753536181 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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