The widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effecton life in today's world.
In this progressive and sophisticated world where we live in, Technology, especially internet may positively or negatively affects human beings' lives. Some individuals believe use of internet has negative impact on peoples' lifestyle, while some others have an opposite point of view. In my vantage point, using internet plays a positive role in each human individuals' life.
First, it is significant to be mentioned that, with the advent of internet many tasks have been made easier, and because human beings have been looking for ways to make tasks more convenient, so this development is of significant importance in life. With using of internet, people perform their tasks faster and more comfortable. For Instance, shopping online paves a way for customers to have a wide variety of choices to buy. Besides, the customers can have a successful shopping by searching on shopping websites at their home, instead of going to shopping malls, by this way they can save time and sustain their energy.
Another reason, which deserves some attention here is that, internet can improve our knowledge and broaden our perspective. Nowadays, there are potent searching engines like Google, in which help us searching any subjects that we do not know. Thus, by searching and reading diverse articles we can elevate our knowledge circle. And by reading many comments and opinions about varied issues we can broaden our view, and realize that only our perspective is not accurate.
Last but not least, having access to internet led us to get information about latest news around the world. It is crucial for every society members to get up to date news about entire world's happens.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that internet has a positive effect in our lives. By using internet, we not only perform tasks in an easier manner, but also enhance our learning.
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- TPO-45 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Governments should focus their budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decisions quickly; when a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as inefficient to the people he leads. 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 37
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements Because people are busy doing so many different things they do very few things well 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... use of internet has negative impact on peoples lifestyle, while some others have an op...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...net plays a positive role in each human individuals life. First, it is significant to be ...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to search' or 'search'.
Suggestion: to search; search
...g engines like Google, in which help us searching any subjects that we do not know. Thus,...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...s to internet led us to get information about latest news around the world. It is crucial fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11254019293 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62238313989 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3327819515 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164549426934 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064322485439 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616618420292 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101204644764 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687395618352 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.