The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries but also for industrialized developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulations cause and suggests at least one of the possible solution.
The growing population is one of the major concerns not only for the small and poor countries but for the developing and developed nations also. While some people say, it's not hurting only to less affluent and undeveloped countries. However, It has a bigger impact on the rapidly developing and industrialized sovereign as well. This essay will discuss the problem that people will face due to the increase of population, and then it will present a solution to overcome this biggest threat of the human being itself.
The most visible impact of the growing population is lack of food access to people and hence, due to that government has to put an extra effort to meet the demand of food for the growing population. Since the increase in demand for food and hence farmers have to clear the forest to occupy the land and grow crops over it. It has an adverse effect on climate change and the country will be more prone to a natural disaster like floods, drought, etc.
Moreover, The increasing population takes its toll on public infrastructure such as roads, water, power supply, etc. Creating additional capacities has cascading effects on the environment and depletion of natural resources. Furthermore, jobs and business opportunities to sustain life and livelihood, also become limited and available for a few minuscule percentages of the population.
To summarize, overpopulation adversely impacts the environment, natural resources, and public infrastructure. The best possible solution to this problem is to educate the citizen of the country about the effects of having more family members. Alternatively, the government also should bring a new regulation and inform people that if they will do more then two children they will not get government benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also become limited and available for a few minuscule percentages of the populat...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...inform people that if they will do more then two children they will not get governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20557491289 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91167472024 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.21349266 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229819898268 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741190237365 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657894430975 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131309390361 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891867512161 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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