Actions speak louder than words. Do you agree with this statement? Discuss your views.
It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays people get angry so quickly because of their irritable behavior due to work, study, etc. Some people argue that we should not show our anger and answer their counterpart by their work only, others counter it and say we have to take a proper action instead of just waiting for the right time. This essay agrees that we should always give a befitting reply to our enemy or friend by completing our work. This essay will discuss my view in the following paragraph and then lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, when we a student live our parents, teachers and other neighbors usually ask about our study. If we don't get outstanding marks in our examination. Moreover, some of our friends and relatives pull our and leg try to make us angry. We should not show our anger in front of them, instead, we should work hard and get a good result. For instance, I had a bad mark in class 9, I did hard work in my exam and got a distinction. Therefore, we have to always invest our energy in positive things.
On the other hand, anyone those who just talk and say they will do this without taking any proper step to complete any work, never try to keep their words. Additionally, they will fail to commit anything which they promise. For example, Pakistan is a country that always gives a threat to its neighbors that they will put a nuclear bomb on India, but it does not have that guts power to do any action. Thus, we should not just say anything but to complete it as well.
In a nutshell, being a student or anyone we should always keep in our mind that we should try to complete our work without saying a single word to anyone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... neighbors usually ask about our study. If we dont get outstanding marks in our ex...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...bors usually ask about our study. If we dont get outstanding marks in our examinatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 20.9802955665 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41479099678 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32377799484 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0123496478 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0642426540991 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238925428066 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328292477762 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398415652881 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343430677711 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 53.1260098522 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.5310837438 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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