In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the dvantages outweigh disadvantages？
Young people nowadays have less urge to birth and raise baby than in the past, which cause bigger age gap between parents and children. This phenomenon will have greater influence in society if it becomes normal and I tend to believe the influence is negative toward human society.
One of the main cause of this development relates to the high life cost and living pressure in modern society. Young people are struggled in keeping balance between work and family. They found out that it is difficult to support themselves when they entering the society, to say nothing of raising a child. Some youngsters decide not to birth at first so that they have no duty in raising child and can focus on work. Many young adults plan to earn enough money and prepare the best for their future child. But with the increasing in living cost, the time line have to be delayed.
Obviously this phenomenon will bring negative effect to society. Firstly, it has led to a decline in birth rates. And in a long-term it can cause a serious population problem. Following up the elderly population increasing, the number of elderly disability increase greatly and that makes the life care demand of the elderly increase rapidly. This will lead to health and society care crisis and all the bills are paid by the young generation which give them higher pressure. Moreover, the decline in birth rates also cause a shortage in army source and led to a weak military power in country.
Overall, I believe the government need to give support to the young generation. Such as raising the salary level and lower the living spend. So that more child will birth in a result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...alary level and lower the living spend. So that more child will birth in a result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78397212544 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37268159237 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0539772197 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625557122516 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176118076695 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464724869916 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045164151526 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647078301317 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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