The best way to reduce the time to travel to work is to turn public areas such as parks in cities centers into houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For decreasing the travelling time from home to work, some people fell the most significant way is to transfer the public facilities in the city centers into houses. I admit the method mentioned above could probably solve the problem in some extent, but it is not the most efficiency way.
It is obvious that more investment to the infrastructure such as metro to improve the transportation efficiency is a great method to reduce the travelling time. The main reason for people from home to work is the traffic jam, therefore, the solution to reduce the travelling time is to establish more convenient public transportation system. For example, subway could shift the numerous individuals in unit time without traffic congestion.
Trying to balance the economic development of the city is another better way to solve the problem. The reason why people take so much travelling time from home to workplace is that they are not easy to find a job near their home. Therefore, the job opportunities average distributed city could decrease commuting time effectively.
That is not to say building more houses to replace public areas could not shortcut the commuting time. Otherwise, more office workers could live close to their companies and the travelling time must be less than before. However, the land in the city center is limitation and the living cost and renting would be higher than rural area. As a result, most people still choose to live outside of the city center for better living conditions.
In sum, replacing the public areas to houses is a method to reduce the commuting time but not the best.
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- The best way to reduce the time to travel to work is to turn public areas such as parks in cities centers into houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... problem. The reason why people take so much travelling time from home to workplace ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02592592593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72024619639 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2464101104 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293240091635 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107462660016 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068944955654 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173297408233 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494318130992 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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