TPO14 integrated writing: Salvage logging
The article states that salvage logging is the best way to benefit from damaged trees, and provides three reasons for support. however, the professor says that although it seems a good idea it has serious long term disadvantages economically and naturally, and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the passage explains that by removing damaged trees it will provides a good environment to grow new ones. The professor refutes this point by saying that by doing this soil wont benefit from nutrition provide from decaying trees, in addition, the removal of trees not necessary treat the soil.
Second, the article explains that insect will increase and attract to the decaying tree so by get rid of them these harmful insect vanish. The professor refutes this reason by explaining that not all of insect is harmful, for example, birds and beneficial insect will be attracted also, furthermore one of insect has been stydied for long period and scintest discover that it has no effect on growing of trees.
Third, the reading claims that this process is economically advantageous by providing wood for industrial use and offering new jobs. however, the professor says that for doing that they need alot of money spend for transfer and recovery of trees, moreover, jobs will be gone to expert people who are not from the city.
In conclusion, although the reading and the lecture are about salvage logging, the points made by the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...and provides three reasons for support. however, the professor says that although it se...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... that by removing damaged trees it will provides a good environment to grow new ones. Th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...r industrial use and offering new jobs. however, the professor says that for doing that...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53680611323 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2007866205 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.111111111 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06452816374 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272166044657 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113206800694 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514180080853 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137838532778 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039187565295 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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