TPO 44
The passage and the lecture discuss a European silver coin dating to 1000 years ago which is founded in Maine in the United States. The passage presents three reasons why the coin could be fake; while the lecture argues against all of them and points out some explanation about why the reasons aren't convincing.
First, the reading claims the distance of Maine and the Norse settlements is too much. Thus, the coin doesn't belong to them. However, the professor believes although the distance was great, there are many other objects except the coin that has been found in this kind of distance of which belong to Europeans. The professor believes, Indeed, native Americans who traveled a lot brought them to Maine.
Second, the passage states that no other coins have been found on the site that Europeans were settled. However, the lecturer argues against this reason by pointing out when they came back from Europe. Actually, they took back all of their valuable staff include their coins. Thus, they certainly bring silver coins with themselves.
Third, the reading claims the coins was useless for them because native Americans didn't recognize silver coins. Thereby, the didn't need them at all. However, the lecturer refutes this idea completely because the coins were attractive and beautiful that native Americans liked to have them. Indeed, they used them as beauty staff like neckless or jewelry. Therefore, Europeans could use coins to trade with native Americans.
Although the passage presents three reasons that claim the coin found in Maine is fake, the professor in the lecture opposes with all of them and believes that none of them are convincing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...settlements is too much. Thus, the coin doesnt belong to them. However, the professor ...
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...eless for them because native Americans didnt recognize silver coins. Thereby, the di...
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...nt recognize silver coins. Thereby, the didnt need them at all. However, the lecturer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09854014599 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2508545272 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0698953998 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439314775727 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151921877455 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825571922202 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244763735959 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510455906848 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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