Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear John and Jason,
I hope this letter finds you well. The pictures you have sent to me remain my occupation in your house for celebrating the Thanksgiving holiday which was last month.
Firstly, I really appreciate the photos, as they include all the marvelous sightseeing and fascinating places where we had visited. they already help me to motivate my family to visit your country for the first time.
Secondly, I was wondering you accept my apologies for being late to write to you earlier. After I arrived home, I was engaged in an essential project of my company and I was completely tired, therefore, I hadn't enough time to write. But you were in my mind and the memories we shared together made me feel awesome.
Furthermore, since I explain all my adventurous trip to my parents, they are really thrilled to visit you both and they told me frequently to invite you to our house and stay with us for next holiday in the way. I am really exhausted to meet you guys and having fun together because I really miss you. Please aware me of your plan. I look forward to visit you soon.
with love,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ascinating places where we had visited. they already help me to motivate my family t...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...nd I was completely tired, therefore, I hadnt enough time to write. But you were in m...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you guys and having fun together because I really miss you. Please aware me of yo...
^^
Line 9, column 349, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...e aware me of your plan. I look forward to visit you soon. with love, Chi Chung
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...an. I look forward to visit you soon. with love, Chi Chung
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.592039801 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51586879668 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7548707599 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34043503377 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1222158089 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081259960286 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174783554994 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129054370238 0.0580467560999 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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