The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart gives the information about the usage and production of electricity in the top ten countries in the year of 2014.

It is clear that China ranked the first, both in electricity production and consumption. On the contrary, Korean was in the last place in both terms among these ten countries.

Obviously, Chinese consumers used the most electricity in 2014 (5,322 billion kWh), over ten times of that in Canada. Next came to the US, in which citizens consumed around 4 trillion kWh. Russian was in the third place (1,038 billion kWh), while the figures in other seven countires like Japan and India were all below 900 billion kWh.

As for electricity production, China gained the first place again, with 5,398 billion kWh. However, United States ranked second on the list (4,099 billion kWh), which was about 2,800 billion kWh more than Russian. It is noticeable that Germany saw a difference comparing to other countries, that its amount of electricity consumed was superior to the figure it produced.

Votes
Average: 9.5 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, third, while, as for, on the contrary, in the third place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04191616766 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57678523593 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.047396594 43.030603864 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126472150737 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903661232533 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954396817855 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11418090745 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10620378371 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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