Nowadays, it is true that the society living in urban areas prefer to use car for their trip than use bycycle.The transportations has each positive or negative affect to them
In the one hand, the main advantage to choose bicycle as a transportation in city areas is environmentally friendly.It is because the bicycle does not need to the fuel which tainting the air such as the gasoline and solar.As we know, the oxygen in urban areas was contaminated by waste and pollution and it must be cut to apply the life balance.For example, the air in the rural region is still clean and natural it is caused by there is so little emissions created by smoke from the transportation fuel.Ride the bicycle also can give healthy lifestyle for the user because it require them spend more energy than drive a car.As a result, the nature will be fresh and i think it is the best way to detoxify some poisons in the air.
Meanwhile,there is many disadvantages from car usage in city areas.Firstly, the gas created by car fuel can make catastrophe because human need fresh air to breathe but if the global warming include the pollution and emission number in the air is increase, that can cause extinction to the animals and human also.Secondly, the car used by urban, raise the traffic and overcrowded problem, especially in the public street.It is due to many people take car too many times even that is not important because car can give the shade for user and then their travel will be unstable and chaotic.As we can see today, the people can't sort the transportation usage for one interest and more consider to the facility that given by the car.
In my view, concern about the effect from transportation to the nature is the most important thing right now, because our environment is deteriorate over time and i think use the transportation which does not use fuel is the best way to reduce the problem especially for urban society.
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| 2019-11-12 | fikri hamdi khaira | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
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Suggestion: It
... city areas is environmentally friendly.It is because the bicycle does not need to...
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Suggestion: As
... the air such as the gasoline and solar.As we know, the oxygen in urban areas was ...
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Suggestion: For
...t must be cut to apply the life balance.For example, the air in the rural region is...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ride
...d by smoke from the transportation fuel.Ride the bicycle also can give healthy lifes...
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Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...althy lifestyle for the user because it require them spend more energy than drive a car...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...them spend more energy than drive a car.As a result, the nature will be fresh and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a result, the nature will be fresh and i think it is the best way to detoxify so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... some poisons in the air. Meanwhile,there is many disadvantages from car usage in...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are many disadvantages
...some poisons in the air. Meanwhile,there is many disadvantages from car usage in city areas.Firstly, t...
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...use extinction to the animals and human also.Secondly, the car used by urban, raise ...
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Suggestion: As
...eir travel will be unstable and chaotic.As we can see today, the people cant sort ...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nvironment is deteriorate over time and i think use the transportation which does...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72638436482 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83416824284 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.2975951904 503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.305199808 49.4020404114 424% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 483.666666667 106.682146367 453% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.333333333 20.7667163134 493% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.3333333333 7.06120827912 600% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184618774434 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13226509975 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185435680847 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13226509975 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185435680847 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.0 13.0946893788 397% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.59 50.2224549098 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 11.3001002004 371% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.04 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.1190380762 423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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