Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Abortion is a highly debatable topic which was discussed over the centuries. The increasing number of abortions have taken peoples attention recently legalisation of abortion is supported by some while there are others argue against. In my opinion, abortion should be an individual's choice and legal framework should not be an obstacle.
Firstly, if we consider the reasons why mothers chose to abort their unborn children, we can identify that majority of them are due to poverty and social issues such as lack of protection and acceptance from their family and loved ones. Secondly, the lack of proper education and poor family planning also could contribute to an unplanned pregnancy and gradually could turn toward abortions. When such unplanned pregnancy happened, people choose to abort the fetus if they are not confident enough to have a baby. Lastly, there can be some medical conditions which could result in abortions. Although people considered that under any circumstances we should not allow abortions, it totally depends on the situation and the person.
Moreover, giving birth to a child without a mother's true love and affection could bring a hateful person to society. In fact, many criminal's family backgrounds and their life story has been greatly contributed to the crimes they performed. If those desperate parents were allowed to do abortions, there would not be criminals who massacre people. Furthermore, no matter how people against abortions, there are only a handful of people who supports poor and less-fortunate families to bring up kids. For instance, I have personally heard several mothers complaining of not having the option to do abortions to prevent their unplanned pregnancies. As a matter of fact, most of them are living miserable lives because of such unfortunate mistakes.
In conclusion, although abortion should be prevented from happening when the mother decided to do that, there should not be any legal issues to prevent that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a mother' or simply 'mothers'?
Suggestion: a mother; mothers
...reover, giving birth to a child without a mothers true love and affection could bring a h...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
...ateful person to society. In fact, many criminals family backgrounds and their life story...
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Line 9, column 418, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...ple against abortions, there are only a handful of people who supports poor and less-fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78668684691 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6657471155 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225380442904 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746866535273 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070060972412 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158114740965 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101049732291 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.