Write a recommendation letter for your friend who is applying for a job. In your letter say:
How long do you know him/her?
What are the main qualities of your friend?
What is his/her work experience?
Dear Mr. White,
I am writing to recommend my friend "Jassica Sofi" who has applied for the position of District Sales Manager in our company " The Royal Enfield Motors".
Jassica and I studied together in 'Masters of Business Administration' in the London School of Business and from that time, I know her. She has many qualities such as punctuality, honesty, hard working, creativity to just name a few. In college, she was always eager to take part in all the events and lead them. For her, leadership was positive point as she always lead to others with example. In a sales project in the market of London, she performed exceptionally well and made higher sales.
Jassica, owing to her personality, got placement in The BMW as a salesgirl and due to her outstanding performance she was promoted to the sales leader within a year.
She has 3 years of work experience in the field of sales. I believe she is competing candidate for the designation of District Sales Manager.
I hope you will consider her profile and will give her chance to serve the organization.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. White, I am writing to recommend my friend &apo...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
...ership was positive point as she always lead to others with example. In a sales proj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97894736842 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91084513339 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1080566468 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186722851901 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641459619373 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409318305509 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873021020298 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178953761505 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.