The chart below illustrates percentage of national consumer spending by category in 2002.There is given 5 European countries such as Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey. This countries divided to 3 expenditures columns First one is food, drinks and tabaco. Second is clothing and footwear and last is leisure and education.
All countries citizens spend most of their money for food and tabaco, than for other expenditures. The highest percentage of meal and tobacco was consumed by Turkey, while the lowest number was showed by Sweden. All given countries spend less than 5 % for leisure and education. In this kind of expenditures the lowest amount have Spain -1.98 % at the same time it 3 times less than for clothing and footwear. Italy have 9 % of consuming clothes and footwear although it is the biggest percentage of expenditures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16058394161 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82960839578 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4019086281 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951511136774 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431633054265 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392780081334 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851192899994 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237996680304 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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