Nowadays, this is an age of globalization. The number of building increasing day by day all over the world. There are several reason for this. The improvement of construction has made the smaller world. Some people believe that we should utilize the space for apartment and/or commercial building constructions to beneficial human beings, while others think that we should protect the rural areas for farm and upcoming generations know about old culture. Both the options have their pros and cons.
Hence, Man has made remarkable progress in construction work and In today’s era, Arise building is a competition across the countries. In world committee’s says that if they do not see the massive buildings, It may consider poverty nations. Arise buildings gives us job opportunities and open the door for living standard luxury life. The pace of life has increased. For example, In India, The government provide incentives and subsidies to poverty people so that They can live the good life in the near future and boost the construction industries also. Day by day unemployment is increasing in today’s era and we now think about youngster’s employment, which gives a lot of Job opportunities.
On the other side, sometimes arise buildings leads to a host of problems. It is occupied the land space and construct the building which is bad image for rural area because they could not use for agriculture and farm on it. They believe that one-day loss their culture also and transform from rural to urban area with massive buildings and make congested for each and every people. Besides, increasing pollution also spoil the greenery area and natural beauty inclusive environment which will affected to global warming. For example, In Singapore they do not have space for agriculture and do farming on the balcony and terrace.
In conclusion, arise buildings as construction gives us lot of opportunities and make a high standard of living but the space is also important to preserve for the natural beauty and farming for basic amenities. In short, the benefits are numerous, while the drawbacks also should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ay by day all over the world. There are several reason for this. The improvement of constructi...
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Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e and boost the construction industries also. Day by day unemployment is increasing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, look, may, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9622241807 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1330232967 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7368421053 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172256730334 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522337816514 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476363457166 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114764476932 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395228303107 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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