Wild animals have no use in the 21st century and trying to preserve animals now is just wastage of money
wild animals have no place in the 21st century. so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree agree?
These days, people think it is point less to spend money and time on preserving wild animals'natural habitat because they do not have any benefits for us. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my own view, it is absurd that we humans have no need for wild animals. I think the planet earth has enough space for all of creatures. it is not fair and ethical to destroy their homes to accommodation and feed people. In other words, there is no compelling reason to destroy their haven to widen our routs , uproot trees to build up houses and furniture. there is no need to exploit every last squrae meter of jungle and other wild animals'habitat. I can not imagine what our planet would be like without them and their habitats. we should make a better and more humane world.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. When we try to conserve a habitat in fact, we avoid disrupting the balance of ecosystem and earth. As result , its advantages back to humans. In my opinion that it is governments duty to monitor closely the changes and should take some practical measures to avoid illegal hunting or defrostation. it is vitally important to organise guards to protect wild animals homes and have harsher punishment for those who break the laws. Furthermore., provide an artificial habitat for those which are classed as an endangered species. I believe it could be effective to teach childern about this issue and aware people about consequences of destroying fragile habitat.
In conclusion, it is not reasonable to think wild animals have no place in this century or protecting them is ridiculous. Preventing loss of natural habitat could help to survive our lonely planet. so all of us, in particular governors should consider the inevitable results of poaching and defrostation and pass strict punishments for law breakers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94202898551 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75255213968 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2903489988 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6818181818 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215849494972 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601198137311 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102929557264 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125785865055 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437573042383 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.