Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and the protection is waste of resources.
To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Although many people believe that Forest Department wasting their capital on wildanimal also say that animal have no place in the 21st century I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement my inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of all the argument the strongest 1 prove my view is , if we lost our wild animals such as Tiger Lion and many more. this is to say our national animal is Tiger and if we cannot give them protection so we lost our national symbol because tiger is a dignity of the symbol which is Ashok Mudra. beside this, it is also true that we cannot serve our today's incident story to hour upcoming generation. By this I mean our upcoming generation unaware from our wildanimals. they only see them in pictures and videos.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mention support. the foremost argument they do is now a days wild animals are fewer because of hunting and deforestation and due to this dangerous animals are come in to residential area and they harmful for people.moreover they also suggest that wildcare department should not spend money on their protection and do not waste resources.
Thus, to rap up the discussion it can be said that after the natural death of wild animals they are useful for human life as a making medicine from their bones from also their skin is a utilise in many things.so we have to raise our voices on animal protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve no place in the 21st century I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement m...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rgument the strongest 1 prove my view is , if we lost our wild animals such as Tig...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...imals such as Tiger Lion and many more. this is to say our national animal is Tiger ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...ity of the symbol which is Ashok Mudra. beside this, it is also true that we cannot se...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...eneration unaware from our wildanimals. they only see them in pictures and videos. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ople counter claim the mention support. the foremost argument they do is now a days...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...pport. the foremost argument they do is now a days wild animals are fewer because of hunti...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...t. the foremost argument they do is now a days wild animals are fewer because of hunti...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and due to this dangerous animals are come in to residential area and they har...
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Line 13, column 185, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rom their bones from also their skin is a utilise in many things.so we have to ra...
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Line 13, column 185, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rom their bones from also their skin is a utilise in many things.so we have to raise our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, i mean, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73015873016 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59390344421 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.5263349213 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.444444444 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192020145876 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640915271446 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762036030148 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125257042508 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677353881515 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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