use of mobile phones.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in believing that. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concern in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of argument in my favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that use of mobile phones can not only contributed to mobile phones play vital role inhuman life. Mobile phone is very good think and easy to use for every one. but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to stay, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributed as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of use of mobile phones.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of use of mobile phones are indeed too great to ignore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rry that this will only lead to a myriad of concern in one's life. However, ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
... that use of mobile phones can not only contributed to mobile phones play vital role inhu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f mobile phones can not only contributed to mobile phones play vital role inhuma...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bile phones can not only contributed to mobile phones play vital role inhuman li...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...od think and easy to use for every one. but also lead to numerous other benefits in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77689243028 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71309183181 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6006563527 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219181334525 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897514147705 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148455768123 0.071462118173 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134122574363 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780787670825 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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