Traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies,
factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, congestion and housing problem in big cities is one of the most serious dilemmas that governments have to face and cope with. I agree with the view that the best solution for this problem is transferring large companies, manufactures and their staffs to the rural areas.
First, it is obvious that in order to facilitate the commute process, citizens tend to choose their houses near their workplaces. Moving companies to countryside where having a lot of available lands and wide roads will lead to the consequences of relocation of employees, thus diminishing traffic and housing problems in big cities.
Moreover, establishing new companies and factories in rural area will attract investments from governments and business corporations on building infrastructure and housing for citizens. In the results, affordable housing price and convenience public facilities will be emerged in countryside, attracting citizens from cities to rural area to enjoy the comfortable life. Therefore, help to diminish the population density in cities and solve the congestion and housing issues in big cities.
It is also true that not all clerks will move their homes following to their work’s location. They might still live at central cities and take a long commute distance to work. But those people are few.
In sum, relocation of companies and factories to countryside is a comprehended method to deal with congestion and extravagant housing price in central cities. It is not only beneficial for individuals who live and work at rural areas, but also for corporations and government as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... is obvious that in order to facilitate the commute process, citizens tend to choose their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37154150198 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0061412871 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1813139801 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22455331529 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756144925132 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455871356133 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115972833709 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476033541065 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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