Write a letter to local newspaper editor, to inform him that article about city/town you know very well which contains some incorrect information.
Write how you know that city
what incorrect information article contains
what they should do about that
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the article "a glimpse of Bathinda" published in The Tribune newspaper on 15th November in which few comments about the city are inappropriate.
From my birth till now, I am resident of the Bathinda city, hence, I know this city from inside out. You have mentioned in your article that this city is the route of drugs. Drugs, which are ruining the entire state's youngsters, cross through the Bathinda city and then distributed to northern state. In the past time, undoubtedly once Bathinda became the route of drugs which come from other state, but now, due to stringent laws as well as diligent efforts of the Police, my city is free from this title.
I would request you to rectify this mistake by publishing the current improvised situation about the city in next article. As your newspaper always stood outstanding due to it's authenticity, you have wide range of subscribers and I do not want them to think negative about my hometown.
I am hoping your adequate steps on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about the article 'a g...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...n distributed to northern state. In the past time, undoubtedly once Bathinda became the r...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter. Yours faithfully, John Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92896174863 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66356309588 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1282107835 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19447976661 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761969267014 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614903928101 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114008519618 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754059451822 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.